Paragraph Coherence Exercise

(C.)
Online chat rooms have become a great source of communication. By utilizing a chat room, you can talk with lots of different people at once. The chat room is a good resource to use inside and outside of the classroom. They have allowed me to converse with other members of my biology class to discuss the lectures and labs. A lot of classes around campus have the chat rooms set up privately for only the students registered in that class, making sure that people who do not belong to a particular class do not gain access to the room. Overall, chat rooms are very effective resources.

(D.)
Unfortunately, inn Los Angeles, the use of dogs in the police force has been rejected, and the use of weapons is preferred. During the Watts riots, which took place in L.A., officers employed guns as a means of protection; some looters and perpetrators were killed (Knutson and Revering 64). However, dogs are a much more suitable and effective alternative to weapons as well as to excessive and deadly force. Although suspects have claimed to be badly bitten, these cases are extremely rare compared to the many documented good deeds and rescues involving human lives performed by police canines. It has therefore been concluded by the 6th Circuit Court that, "since deaths are rare in police dog cases, deploying dogs cannot be condemned as deadly force." (Savage para 12).