Does the paper flow correctly, and would you change the order of the positions? I feel like it goes in a good order but let me know if you would change it.
I can get wordy with my sentences at times, so tell me if you think I should change my wording around if it doesn't make sense.
Does my paper have sufficient evidence, or should I be looking for more? I feel like my positions have equal support, but if you feel differently, let me know.
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I would say the paper flows just fine, with the exception of the definiton of steriods in the first paragraph that doesnt seem to fit. The sentence wording is okay and there is more than sufficient evidence to get your point across. The paper is full of citations which shows good credibiility. The paper seems to be unbiased and an all around good exploratory essay.
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